Sunday, July 15, 2012

Daybreak

Coming home
after a night out,
morning sun
won the race
to her front door. Yesterday
would be remembered.


Inspired by Tess and Jack Vettriano at Mag 126

32 comments:

  1. I like the morning sun shining at the window ~

    Great take on the prompt ~

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  2. She looks as if it's been a very hard night! Frazzled is nothing compared to your version.

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  3. Morning sun through glass bricks ... lovely image + lovely words.

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  4. lovely descriptive of a morning after the night before ...thanks for sharing ! x

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  5. I like the transformation of the image. Strong connection with your turn of phrase!

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  6. Haha..you always manage to make me smile. She had a hard night partying eh! Love what you did with the pic too :)

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  7. Dear Jinksy: "Yesterday would be remembered" and this amazing art and yes it is morning sun...see this now~ Brilliant Thank-you~

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  8. I love the sunny warmth of your poem and the picture prompt you've redesigned. It sings with such a happy hum. Thanks for sharing, Jinksy.

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  9. short and sweet...i miss nights like that :)

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  10. Late coming home. It must have been a raucous night. Surely it would be remembered. Nice take Jinsky!

    Hank

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  11. Nice wordplay ... loved reading it :-)

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  12. Your ‘Altered Images’ (weren’t they a pop group? ) fit your words perfectly.

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  13. Many thoughts are provoked on the evening and morning home coming here,
    Some pleasant and some not.
    A great piece of Art this.

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  14. Would she remember much when the night before made her look like that? Even so - well done.

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  15. Love what you did with this all around.

    =)

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  16. I love what you've done with the picture! And your poem matches perfectly! Nice to those memorable nights every once in a while.

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  17. Don't you just love nights like that?

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  18. Perfect, from the artwork to the brevity...very impressive.

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  19. Excellent!..and once again I just am impressed with your take on the photo!

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  20. Ah very beautiful , Jinksy, with all the liquid fire elementals to assist her reclections, she gathers the energies of the dawn unto herself, becore retiring to sleep !

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  21. Reminds me of the Juice Newton song, Angel of Morning "

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  22. The hussy!! Na.....only kidding, Jinksy! I'd love to race the sun but I always disappear when he comes out to play!

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  23. the perfect poem for the image, Pen! ♥

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