Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Fantasia

The stream
unravels views
till imagination
ripples across the mind's canvas,
dreaming.

Colours,
in gaudy dance,
sway to silent music
sung by invisible makers
of songs.

And time
flows between worlds,
linking past and present,
fact and fantasy; old and new,
reborn.

Written and created in response to Mag #116, also linked to dVerse  and Open Link Monday on IGWRT
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19 comments:

  1. Carrie Van HornMay 9, 2012 at 4:25 PM

    "old and new reborn"....this is a lovely poem Jinksy! True and beautiful! :-)

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  2. imacMay 9, 2012 at 5:11 PM

    Really love this piece of work my friend,

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  3. HelenMay 9, 2012 at 6:08 PM

    Surreal image ... words rival its beauty.

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  4. chrisdMay 9, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    "time flows between 2 worlds" So true

    I enjoyed this poem and loved how you played with the Magpie Picture. Very creative.

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  5. Brian MillerMay 10, 2012 at 12:25 AM

    nice...cool image...and love the little bit of resurrection in the end of this...

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  6. ScarletMay 10, 2012 at 2:38 AM

    I like your creative take...reborn is a beautiful word ~

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  7. TrellissimoMay 10, 2012 at 6:02 PM

    And here's a place where fact and fantasy meet, it seems. :) Your image is sure fire eye catcher.

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  8. hyperCRYPTICalMay 11, 2012 at 11:27 AM

    Rivers, oceans have this capacity to make us dream... thanks Jinksy.

    Anna :o]

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  9. vivinfranceMay 11, 2012 at 4:53 PM

    Gorgeous, Jinksy. And it fits the picture so well!

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  10. Lyn (chimra66)May 12, 2012 at 7:03 PM

    Very lovely. It was like your words were just pulling you into the picture. Loved it.

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  11. KarenMay 14, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!

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  12. MaryMay 15, 2012 at 12:45 AM

    I love the images I see in my mind as I read your poem!

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  13. HerotomostMay 15, 2012 at 2:15 AM

    Time flows and we ride the colorful current of your words...this was awesome.

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  14. Abin ChakrabortyMay 15, 2012 at 7:55 AM

    beautiful combination of picture and poem.so bright and lively!

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  15. Mystic_MomMay 15, 2012 at 2:28 PM

    This almost dances, and goes so well with the image you choose. Nicely done!

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  16. Kerry O'ConnorMay 15, 2012 at 3:26 PM

    I love the form of this poem. It lends a gentle flow to your words. The image is quite stunning too. Lovely to see your work on RT.

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  17. AnonymousMay 15, 2012 at 6:45 PM

    I love the flow of your poem. Very nice.

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  18. UnknownMay 15, 2012 at 11:37 PM

    One of my best friends is a weaver. Today we talked about the connections between textiles and paints and words and creators. This poem and image could have been the sidebar to our conversation. :-)

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  19. MargaretMay 16, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    till imagination
    ripples across the mind's canvas,

    That is what we all wait for :)

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