Sunday, July 15, 2012

Daybreak

Coming home
after a night out,
morning sun
won the race
to her front door. Yesterday
would be remembered.

Inspired by Tess and Jack Vettriano at Mag 126
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32 comments:

  1. Strummed WordsJuly 15, 2012 at 3:27 PM

    Good one, Jinsky!

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  2. ScarletJuly 15, 2012 at 3:41 PM

    I like the morning sun shining at the window ~

    Great take on the prompt ~

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  3. FrikoJuly 15, 2012 at 3:56 PM

    She looks as if it's been a very hard night! Frazzled is nothing compared to your version.

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  4. Tess KincaidJuly 15, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    I like the banshee look...

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  5. HelenJuly 15, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    Morning sun through glass bricks ... lovely image + lovely words.

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  6. UnknownJuly 15, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    lovely descriptive of a morning after the night before ...thanks for sharing ! x

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  7. Irish GumboJuly 15, 2012 at 5:42 PM

    I like the transformation of the image. Strong connection with your turn of phrase!

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  8. Laurie KolpJuly 15, 2012 at 6:11 PM

    Electrifying!

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  9. DaydreamerJuly 15, 2012 at 6:11 PM

    Haha..you always manage to make me smile. She had a hard night partying eh! Love what you did with the pic too :)

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  10. chiccorealJuly 15, 2012 at 6:20 PM

    Dear Jinksy: "Yesterday would be remembered" and this amazing art and yes it is morning sun...see this now~ Brilliant Thank-you~

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  11. UnknownJuly 15, 2012 at 9:17 PM

    I love the sunny warmth of your poem and the picture prompt you've redesigned. It sings with such a happy hum. Thanks for sharing, Jinksy.

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  12. izzyJuly 15, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    Melting- good one, thanks.

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  13. Kathe W.July 16, 2012 at 1:58 AM

    very sexy..

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  14. Day DreamerJuly 16, 2012 at 2:33 AM

    short and sweet...i miss nights like that :)

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  15. kaykualaJuly 16, 2012 at 5:35 AM

    Late coming home. It must have been a raucous night. Surely it would be remembered. Nice take Jinsky!

    Hank

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  16. Amrit SinhaJuly 16, 2012 at 10:52 AM

    Nice wordplay ... loved reading it :-)

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  17. Little NellJuly 16, 2012 at 12:36 PM

    Your ‘Altered Images’ (weren’t they a pop group? ) fit your words perfectly.

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  18. imacJuly 16, 2012 at 2:16 PM

    Many thoughts are provoked on the evening and morning home coming here,
    Some pleasant and some not.
    A great piece of Art this.

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  19. Doc FTSEJuly 16, 2012 at 2:43 PM

    Would she remember much when the night before made her look like that? Even so - well done.

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  20. Susan AndersonJuly 16, 2012 at 6:02 PM

    Love what you did with this all around.

    =)

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  21. Maude LynnJuly 16, 2012 at 6:34 PM

    Excellent, Jinksy!

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  22. LolamouseJuly 17, 2012 at 3:30 AM

    I love what you've done with the picture! And your poem matches perfectly! Nice to those memorable nights every once in a while.

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  23. Tumblewords:July 17, 2012 at 6:08 AM

    Don't you just love nights like that?

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  24. LynJuly 17, 2012 at 8:37 PM

    Perfect, from the artwork to the brevity...very impressive.

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  25. 21 WitsJuly 17, 2012 at 11:57 PM

    Excellent!..and once again I just am impressed with your take on the photo!

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  26. AnonymousJuly 18, 2012 at 8:05 AM

    Good one! :)

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  27. Silent Otto July 19, 2012 at 3:38 AM

    Ah very beautiful , Jinksy, with all the liquid fire elementals to assist her reclections, she gathers the energies of the dawn unto herself, becore retiring to sleep !

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  28. Silent Otto July 19, 2012 at 3:38 AM

    Reminds me of the Juice Newton song, Angel of Morning "

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  29. HelenaJuly 19, 2012 at 9:11 PM

    The hussy!! Na.....only kidding, Jinksy! I'd love to race the sun but I always disappear when he comes out to play!

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  30. JJ Roa RodriguezJuly 19, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    it will surely be... good!

    JJRod'z

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  31. dsJuly 20, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    Nice!

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  32. AnonymousJuly 31, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    the perfect poem for the image, Pen! ♥

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